Literature Review
Steve Graham Discusses Writing and Strategy Instruction
"Strategy instruction takes invisible processes and makes them visible for both struggling and non-struggling writers"
Professional writers have long lamented the difficulty of their craft. Nathaniel
Hawthorne said, “Easy reading is damn hard writing” (Quote Garden, 2012). Gene Fowler
said, “Writing is easy: All you do is sit staring at a blank sheet of paper until drops of
blood form on your forehead,” and Joseph Heller said, “Every writer I know has trouble
writing” (Quote Garden, 2012). Many students including those with learning problems,
struggle with the strategies that skilled writers use such as developing and organizing
ideas, controlling and regulating the writing process, and monitoring the quality of their
own writing (Graham & Harris, 1993). In order to address inefficiencies in student writing
and writing development, Steve Graham and his colleagues (1993) have done extensive
research in the instruction of writing strategies combined with self-regulation of thinking
behaviors. Graham’s model entitled Self-Regulated Strategy Development (SRSD) explicitly
teaches students strategies for planning and revising their writing, as well as procedures
for regulating these strategies. The goal of SRSD is to help students to master higher level
cognitive composing processes, develop independent use of writing strategies, and create
positive attitude (Graham & Harris, 1993). Self-regulated strategy instruction emphasizes
the use of temporary scaffolding of students in their strategy use. The teacher models,
explains, and assists whenever necessary. Also, students set goals to improve their writing
and self-monitor changes in their writing performance and behavior. They develop
internal dialogue for writing and self-instructions. They may even develop self-statements
for unwanted or wanted behaviors. Discussion promotes knowledge of self, writing, and
the writing process (Graham & Harris, 1993).
In their 1993 article, Graham and Harris discuss seven recursive stages as the basic
components of SRSD: preskill development, initial student-teacher goals conference,
strategy instruction, modeling, memorization of strategy, collaborative practice, and
independent performance (Graham & Harris, 1993).
Explicit instruction is the direct instruction of strategies by the teacher. Explicit
instruction takes place at the beginning of the lesson and then students practice the skill
or strategy with individualized support. Perhaps most crucial to the whole process is the
enthusiasm and engagement of the teacher who must help students master the strategy.
We have consistently found self-regulated strategy development to be an effective
and efficient means for teaching writing strategies, including strategies involving
brainstorming, semantic webbing, text structure, goal setting, monitoring productivity,
peer response in revising, and revising for both mechanics and substance. (Graham &
Harris, 1993).
Not only do children and inexperienced writers lack strategic knowledge, but they also have
trouble transferring that knowledge or abstracting their strategy use from one task to
another once they are utilizing strategic processes (Graham & Harris, 1993).
In a study by Troia, Graham, and Harris (1999), students with learning disabilities were
instructed in SRSD. The model also was modified to include a focus on helping
students learn to generalize planning strategies. In the first three lessons, the first author
who was also the teacher, modeled goal setting, brainstorming and organizing for a
writing task. Then students spent time answering questions designed to help them
abstract the strategies so that they would be able to connect them to other writing tasks.
The next two lessons scaffolded students as they engaged in a writing task, using the
mnemonic STOP (stop, think of purpose) and LIST (list ideas, sequence them) to remember
the strategy elements (Troia et al., 1999).
After writing, students were assessed as to whether or not they had met their goals. At
the end of each of these lessons, students were asked to apply STOP and LIST at home in
some way. In the final two lessons, students planned and wrote independently. When
students were able to use STOP and LIST without help, and two homework assignments
had been completed successfully, practice stopped. At the end, students were asked to
reflect on the usefulness of goal setting, brainstorming, and sequencing across tasks and
considered how helpful the strategies were.
Results indicate a huge change in student planning behavior after strategy instruction.
Where students had not created plans at all in the baseline assessments, they began
allotting as much time for planning as for actual writing. Story structure improved
dramatically, though story quality did not. Essays also increased in length and functional
elements, but quality did not improve much. These findings show that students with
learning disabilities should receive instruction to help with self-regulatory procedures
during writing. They should be explicitly taught to use the planning strategies employed by
more expert writers (Troia et al., 1999).
Another study by De La Paz and Graham (2002) examined the effectiveness of a writing
instruction program for middle school students. The program focus included strategy
instruction in planning, drafting, and revising, instruction in the characteristics of good
writing and review of the criteria for evaluating writing as well as the facets of persuasive
writing (De La Paz & Graham, 2002). Key elements of the program emphasized planning,
which included analyzing assignment demands, goal setting, and generating and
organizing material. The program also emphasized planning and revising as necessary
while writing (De La Paz & Graham, 2002). Explicit instruction in writing strategies and
procedures for regulation of the strategies were a part of the self-regulated strategy
development model. The research setting was two suburban middle schools in the
southeast and included four seventh- and eighth- grade teachers who participated and
taught experimental and control classes. The selected composition genre was the
persuasive expository essay. In the experimental group, students were taught specific plan
and write strategies combined with self-regulatory procedures to facilitate the use of plan
and write strategies writing (De La Paz & Graham, 2002).
Lesson one introduced students to planning and writing and introduced the
mnemonics PLAN and WRITE to help students remember the steps of the strategy. “P” =
Pay attention to the prompt, “L” = List main ideas, “A” = Add supporting ideas, and “N” =
Number your ideas. “W” = Work from your plan to develop your thesis statement, “R” =
Remember your goals, “I” = Include transitions, “T” = Try to use different kinds of
sentences, and “E” = Exciting words (De La Paz & Graham, 2002). Additionally, in
subsequent sessions, teachers presented model essays and labeled the parts with
students, introduced the holistic scoring rubric used by the state for testing, and met with
students individually to set goals. Next, teachers modeled through think-aloud the PLAN
and WRITE strategies as well as strategies for organizing ideas. The recursiveness of the
writing process also was emphasized during modeling writing (De La Paz & Graham, 2002).
After modeling, students began to compose an essay as a class using the PLAN and
WRITE strategies. Then students worked in small groups to compose another essay.
Students then were given time to revise their essays and conference with peers. Again,
instructors modeled this process and introduced a checklist. In the final instructional
period, students composed essays independently, and teachers helped individual students
but reduced scaffolding as students became independent. Students wrote independently
for five days, writing up to four essays for practice.
Results show that the writing program had a positive effect on writing performance
(De La Paz & Graham, 2002). Students in the experimental groups wrote essays that
were longer, had more mature vocabulary and were of higher quality. Students in the
experimental groups also generated plans to a greater degree after receiving instruction in
the PLAN strategy, and their plans were more complete and of better quality. This study
supports the explicit instruction of pre-writing and planning strategies as well as self-
regulated strategy development (De La Paz & Graham, 2002).
Other researchers have also explored SRSD. Another example is a study conducted by
MacArthur and Philippakos (2010). They focused on strategy instruction in the
development of compare-contrast essays with six middle students studying at a school for
students with learning disabilities Students learned a set of strategies for planning,
writing, and evaluating compare-contrast essays. Instruction was based on the principles
of the SRSD. The researchers found that students made gains in text structure and quality
of their writing. Length changes were variable. Text structure scores were still above
baseline at one and two month checks, while for two students, quality of writing receded
to baseline at the one month maintenance check. Students made gains on text structure
and quality of writing at the end of the study (MacArthur & Philippakos, 2010).
Effective instruction of writing strategies includes explicit instruction in the
components of good writing. For example, before students can form a thesis and develop
support for that thesis, they need to read examples of both strong and weak essays and
follow along with the teacher’s thought processes as he/she analyzes writing according to
criteria for good writing. In a recent study by the Institute of Education Sciences, 74
Oregon schools participated in research to explore the impact of use of the 6 + 1 Writing
Traits with grade five students (Coe, Hanita, & Smiley, 2011). Two thousand, two hundred,
and thirty-five students and one hundred and two teachers participated in the treatment
condition. Teachers were trained in using the 6 + 1 Traits in a summer institute. They were
asked to use a cycle of student instruction that included:
Using the rubric to plan, teaching the language by rewriting the rubric in student-
friendly language, scoring papers, justifying the scores by using the rubric, and
discussing the scoring process, modeling several trait-based activities or focus lessons,
creating a writing prompt, gathering a written product for assessment purposes, and
measuring overall student improvement as well as improvement in the specific trait
(Coe, Hanita, & Smiley, 2011, p. 27).
Results gathered over the course of one year of implementation indicate that “use of
the 6+1 Trait Writing model significantly increased student writing scores during the year
in which it was introduced to schools” (Coe, Hanita, & Smiley, 2011, p. 50).
Heidi Goodrich Andrade (2005) has done much research on the use of rubrics to
enhance writing instruction. Andrade’s research has shown that if used in classroom
instruction rather than simply as scoring guides, rubrics help students understand and
focus their writing goals. Furthermore, Andrade says that when students help their teacher
create the rubric they will be using for a writing task, students become engaged in the
evaluative process.. Combining this act of co-creation with analysis of good and weak
writing and rubrics helps students better understand the assignment goals.
In a study which set out to test claims related to rubric-referenced self-assessment in
middle school students, Andrade, Du, and Mycek (2010) hypothesized that reading a
model paper, generating criteria for a rubric, and using a rubric to self-assess first drafts
would improve writing scores.. The research took place in the northeast of the United
States and included 162 participants in eleven classes. Eighty-six percent of the students
were Caucasion, seventy-five percent were girls, and eight percent were designated as
“children with special needs.” Five public school classes and six private school classes
were included in the study. Students wrote persuasive essays. The rubric used in the
treatment groups was based on the 6+1 Trait Writing Method and included six levels of
quality instead of four.
Students engaged in prewriting, received feedback from the teacher on drafts and
wrote final drafts. Students in the treatment group read and discussed a model essay and
created a list of the elements of an effective essay. They also received a written rubric and
used it to self-assess their rough drafts. Students in the control group did not read a
model essay or receive a rubric. They were still asked to review their rough drafts,
however. In the treatment group, students self-assessed by underlining key phrases in the
rubric and then looking for and noting evidence of the standard in their own draft.
Students also spent class time on each step of the writing process. The treatment
group writing scores were significantly higher than the control group’s. Researchers also
reviewed scores by looking at the seven criteria in the rubric and comparing them
individually. The treatment group’s scores were consistently higher for each criterion. This
study’s results support the idea that middle school students who use model papers to
generate criteria and then self-assess according to these criteria will improve the quality
of their writing (Andrade et al., 2010, p. 207).
Other research of writing instruction has focused on effective teaching of written
argument. Results show that effective instruction includes explicit strategy instruction
that is carefully scaffolded by teachers. Felton and Herko (2004) studied written argument
taught in a writing workshop format. Thirty-six students from an urban public school
participated.
The goal of the instruction was to build on oral debate skills and to strengthen written
arguments. Structured reading, debate and metacognitive reflection was used. Participants
were eleventh-grade students taking a humanities course that integrates the study of
literature with United States history. Cooperating teachers selected the topics of hate
speech, abortion, and gun control.
An initial lesson introduced the structure of argument and led students in activities
focused on deepening comprehension of two-sided argument. Then two 90-minute blocks
focused on a controversial topic. Students were give background information for varying
perspectives. Next, students were assigned positions to argue. Using the acronym PREP
(position, reason, explanation, and proof), students developed their positions on a graphic
organizer (Felton & Herko, 2004, p. 676). Students then wrote persuasive papers.
Researchers of writing instruction often include the use of concept maps or graphic
organizers in their studies. Graphic organizers help scaffold student learning by making
ideas visible and clarifying relationships and hierarchical order of specific concepts.
In a study by Lee and Tan (2010), the researchers wanted to explore the effectiveness
of giving feedback to students through the use of graphic organizers. The authors adopted
a case study approach for the research in order to cope with multiple variables and
sources of evidence (Lee & Tan, 2010). Participants in the study were 36 engineering
students in two first-year effective communication courses in an Asian university. In a
questionnaire given to students prior to the study, students indicated that they did not
know what graphic organizers were. Ages of students ranged from 17 to 21, and 30 men
and 6 women participated (Lee & Tan, 2010).
In the first session, entitled by the authors as Pre-Sessions, students filled out the
prequestionnaire and were introduced to graphic organizers. Teachers modeled the use of
the graphic organizers as well as how to give feedback on them (Lee & Tan, 2010). Pre-
sessions lasted for approximately two weeks, and six organizers were introduced. These
graphic organizers reflected the most common forms of composition organization: main
idea and sub-ideas, cause-effect, and compare-contrast.
In the fourth week of the instruction, entitled In-Session, students learned about the
writing assignment and were asked to plan their writing by choosing one of the graphic
organizer formats that had been presented to them. The writing task also was divided into
three pre-writing processes: extracting and categorizing information, integrating
information, and drawing conclusions. The first-pre-writing process was done in class.
When students were finished, they completed the mental difficulty questionnaire, a survey
that asked students to rate the level of difficulty of the task. Then they gave their
organizers to a classmate for comment. Next, students revised their organizers based on
peer feedback. They then filled out a mental difficulty questionnaire again.. Finally,
organizers were submitted to the teacher for feedback and when these were given back to
students, they revised their organizers one last time and filled out a mental difficult
questionnaire.
Two more writing assignments followed this same pattern though students followed the
steps outside of class. In week seven, the group participated in a group discussion of the
pre-writing process in order to gather student reflections. The results showed that
students highly valued teacher feedback over peer feedback (Lee & Tan, 2010). Also,
findings showed that students’ relevance of ideas only improved after teacher feedback.
Focus group discussion revealed that the organizers clarified feedback, but students also
desired more training with the organizers.
All in all, the literature shows that students who receive explicit instruction in strategies
and strategy use, combined with scaffolded practice of the strategies make significant
gains in organization and idea development.