Summary of Findings for Each Student by Type: Graphic Organizers
Subject A: Graphic Organizers
Subject A did not create a graphic organizer for the initial assessment. For Writing
Task 1, Subject A received .5 points for organization and .5 points for content on the
rough draft of the graphic organizer for a total of 1 point. On the final draft, he received
1.5 points for organization and 1.5 points for content for a total of 3 points.
For Writing Task 2, Subject A received .5 points for organization and 1 point for
content on his rough draft graphic organizer for a total of 1.5 points. On the final graphic
organizer he received 1.5 points for organization and 1.5 points for content for a total of
3 points.
For Writing Task 3, Subject A received 1.5 points for organization and 1 point for
content on his rough draft graphic organizer for a total of 2.5 points. He did not revise
his rough draft graphic organizer to create a final graphic organizer.
For the final assessment, Subject A created a graphic organizer, receiving 1 point for
organization and .5 points for content for a total of 1.5 points.

Discussion of Change in Subject A: Graphic Organizers
Subject A did not create a graphic organizer for the initial assessment. For the final
assessment, Subject A did create a graphic organizer and received 1 point for
organization and .5 points for content for a total of 1.5 points. Subject A showed change
in this case by deciding to create a graphic organizer but did not excel in organization
and idea development in his final assessment graphic organizer. However, in two of the
writing tasks, Subject A showed change in the final drafts of the graphic organizers
submitted with each. In the third writing task, Subject A created a rough draft of a graphic
organizer and demonstrated change in his ability to organize and develop ideas. Subject A
did not revise this rough graphic organizer to enhance it further after teacher feedback.

Subject B: Graphic Organizers
Subject B created a graphic organizer for the initial assessment and received 1 point for
organization and 1 point for content for a total of 2 points. For Writing Task 1, Subject B
received .5 points for organization and .5 points for content on her rough draft graphic
organizer for a total of 1 point. For the final graphic organizer, Subject B received 1 point
for organization and 1 point for content for a total of 2 points. For Writing Task 2, Subject
B received 1 point for organization and 1 point for content on her rough draft graphic
organizer. She received 1.5 points for organization and 1 point for content on her final
graphic organizer for a total of 2.5 points.
Subject B received 1 point for organization and .5 points for content on the rough
graphic organizer for Writing Task 3 for a total of 1.5 points. She received 1.5 points for
organization and 1.5 points for content on her final graphic organizer for Writing Task 3
for a total of 3 points.

Discussion of Change in Subject B: Graphic Organizers
Subject B created a graphic organizer for the initial assessment and received 1 point for
organization and one point for content for a total of 2 points. Subject B did not create a
graphic organizer for the final writing assessment, thus change in Subject B cannot be
measured in relation to graphic organizer development. However, Subject B showed growth
in the revisions of graphic organizers for each writing task.

Subject C: Graphic Organizers
Subject C did not create a graphic organizer for the initial assessment. For the rough
draft graphic organizer for Writing Task 1, Subject C received 1.5 points for organization
and .5 points for content for a total of 2 points. For her final draft of the graphic organizer
for Writing Task 1, Subject C received 1 point for organization and 1 point for content for
a total of 2 points.
For the rough draft graphic organizer of Writing Task 2, Subject C received .5 points
for organization and .5 points for content for a total of 1 point. For her final draft of the
graphic organizer for Writing Task 2, Subject C received 1.5 points for organization and 1
point for content for a total of 2.5 points.
For the rough draft of the graphic organizer for Writing Task 3, Subject C received .5
points for organization and .5 points for content for a total of 1 point. For her final draft
of the graphic organizer for Writing Task 3, Subject C received 1 point for organization
and 1 point for content for a total of 2 points. Subject C created a graphic organizer for
the final assessment and received 1.5 points for organization and 1.5 points for content
for a total of 3 points.

Discussion of Change in Subject C: Graphic Organizers
Subject C did not create a graphic organizer for her initial assessment but did create
one for her final assessment and performed better in this than she had on those created
for her writing tasks. She received 1.5 points for organization and 1.5 points for content
for a total of 3 points. Subject C also demonstrated change in her revised final drafts of
her graphic organizers for each of the writing tasks.

Subject D: Graphic Organizers
Subject D created a graphic organizer for his initial assessment. He received 1 point
for organization and .5 points for content for a total of 1.5 points. Subject D received .5
points for organization and .5 points for content on his rough draft graphic organizer for
Writing Task 1. He did not complete a final draft of the graphic organizer for Writing Task
1. For Writing Task 2, Subject D received 1.5 points for organization and 1.5 points for
content on the rough draft of his graphic organizer for a total score of 3. He received 1.5
points for organization and 1.5 points for content on the final draft of his graphic
organizer for a total score of 3.
For Writing Task 3, Subject D received .5 points for organization and .5 points for
content on the rough draft of his graphic organizer for a total of 1 point. He received .5
points for organization and .5 points for content on the final draft of his graphic organizer
for a total of 1 point.
On his final assessment, Subject D did create a graphic organizer and received .5
points for organization and .5 points for content for a total of 1 point.

Discussion of Change in Subject D: Graphic Organizers
Subject D created graphic organizers for both the initial assessment and the final
assessment but did not show change. Change was not apparent in either of the graphic
organizers Subject D created.

Subject E: Graphic Organizers
Subject E created a graphic organizer for his initial assessment. He received 1 point for
organization and .5 points for content for a total of 1.5 points.
For Writing Task 1, Subject E received .5 points for organization and .5 points for
content on the rough draft of his graphic organizer for a total of 1 point. For his final
draft of the graphic organizer for Writing Task 1, Subject E received 1.5 points for
organization and 1.5 points for content for a total of 3 points.
Subject E received 1 point for organization and 1 point for content on his rough draft
of the graphic organizer for Writing Task 2. He received 1.5 points for organization and
1.5 points for content for a total of 3 points on his final graphic organizer for Writing Task
2. For Writing Task 3, Subject E received 1.5 points for organization and 1 point for
content for a total of 2.5 points on his rough draft graphic organizer. He received 1.5
points for organization and 1 point for content of his final graphic organizer for Writing
Task 3 for a total of 2.5 points.
On his final assessment, Subject E created a graphic organizer and received 1.5 points
for organization and 1.5 points for content for a total of 3 points.

Discussion of Change in Subject E: Graphic Organizers
Subject E created a graphic organizer for both the initial assessment and the final
assessment. For the final assessment, Subject E showed change. He received 1.5 points for
organization and 1.5 points for content for a total of 3 points.

Subject F: Graphic Organizers
Subject F created a graphic organizer for her initial assessment. She received .5
points for organization and .5 points for content for a total of 1 point.
For Writing Task 1, Subject F received 1 point for organization and 1 point for
content on her rough draft graphic organizer for a total of 2 points. For the final draft
of her graphic organizer for Writing Task 1, Subject F received 1.5 points for
organization and 1.5 points for content for a total of 3 points.
Subject F received 1.5 points for organization and .5 points for content on the rough
draft graphic organizer for Writing Task 2 for a total of 2 points. For her final draft of
the graphic organizer for Writing Task 2, Subject F received 1.5 points for organization
and 1.5 points for content for a total of 3 points.
Subject F received 1.5 points for organization and 1 point for content on the rough
draft of her graphic organizer for Writing Task 3. She received 1.5 points for
organization and 1.5 points for content on the final draft of the graphic organizer for
Writing Task 3 for a total of 3 points. For her final assessment, Subject F created a
graphic organizer and received 1.5 points for organization and 1.5 points for content for
a total of 3 points.

Discussion of Change in Subject F: Graphic Organizers
Subject F created graphic organizers for both the initial assessment and the final
assessment. For the final assessment’s graphic organizer, Subject F showed change. She
received a 1.5 for organization and a 1.5 for content for a total of 3 points.
